Just You... Just Me:)

You & I

Let's chase these stars

One by one

Around the galaxies

Let's live our dreams

One by one

In an enchanted castle

One by one

Holding hands

Heavy hearts

Heavenly clouds

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Let's get back the time

One more time

Going backwards

Let's start the play

With nothing left to prove

Like the sparkling star

One by one

Holding hands

No more tears

No more fears

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Let's break free

One by one

From all our chains

Let's open our eyes

One by one

See more than what we can see

Forever kind

Forever blind

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Even after years

We'll always be so close to tears

Just you and me!

Author's Note

Thank you for your valuable comments.
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Reviews

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

although on emotional level I can not relate this, however on a poetic level that is something different. there is innocence here that you have found and I myself have yet, So in an emotional way I am green with envy.

love these lines....

Let's break free
One by one
From all our chains

and

Forever kind
Forever blind

Love is not only blind but is for the luck and brave....It seems that you have all of your bases covered.....well done

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

fortes fortuna adiuvat:) Thank you Rico:)

[Camryn Jeter]

Repetition is in all the right places... and I'm no professional, but my amateur opinion is that this is lovely.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thanks Camryn :) I'm no pro either... 😁 lol

[Mary Bradley]

Perfection ! ... I love how the words rhyme beautifully :-) ... I really enjoy it

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank You Mary:) Hope you enjoy my other write-ups as much you've enjoyed this,

[Ana B.]

I liked the way the phrase '' one by one'' was atributed here. A sweet and romantic piece!

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you Ana:) You are sweet too:)

[Rochelle]

I loved it, keep on writing :)

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you for your enthusiastic words Belle:)

[Sami Khalil]

So sweet and lovely. Much enjoyed...:)......................

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thanks Sami:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Confuser]

Thought it was lovely and I enjoyed it very much; the desire driven message, very passionate; I have to stop and say: the picture is so goofy it is quite distracting, but maybe you think the same of mine. I am on facebook; so many fake people here, why do we hide; with such beautiful words you hold inside...I was compelled to continue reading; I see below a comments re: song and I disagree; it is definitely sweet poetry...it is a simple passionate plea for love - and I did love it. Thank you so very much!

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

'Sweet Poetry', ''passionate plea for love', those are really very kind words from you to say that of my song:) Than you:) privileged:)
I'm a goofy guy at times:) And this is one of my avatars:) I'll keep rotating them... Besides I have nothing to hide or to be fake about as you say:)

[Confuser]

I was born goofy my dear!

[Johanna]

Thanks for sharing this Jerald! It looks like a song to me. If you make the repeated stanzas only once, its close to an ee cummings in the making. Good job :) I specifically like how you use "one by one"

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

THanks Johanna:)
I hope you go through my other write-ups 'one by one' too :P

[Johanna]

Hahahaha. Sure

[*CrazyBeautiful*]

❤ I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you very much:)

[Amy Rose]

Beautiful!

"Let's live our dreams
One by one
In an enchanted castle"

Keep it up!!

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you amy :)

[Amy Rose]

You are most welcome :)

[Emily]

I love the wording and the meaning!
Keep it up!!

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thanks Emily :)

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

I will :) hopefully