Just You... Just Me:)

You & I

Let's chase these stars

One by one

Around the galaxies

Let's live our dreams

One by one

In an enchanted castle

One by one

Holding hands

Heavy hearts

Heavenly clouds

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Let's get back the time

One more time

Going backwards

Let's start the play

With nothing left to prove

Like the sparkling star

One by one

Holding hands

No more tears

No more fears

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Let's break free

One by one

From all our chains

Let's open our eyes

One by one

See more than what we can see

Forever kind

Forever blind

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Even after years

We'll always be so close to tears

Just you and me!

Author's Note

Thank you for your valuable comments.
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Reviews

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

although on emotional level I can not relate this, however on a poetic level that is something different. there is innocence here that you have found and I myself have yet, So in an emotional way I am green with envy.

love these lines....

Let's break free
One by one
From all our chains

and

Forever kind
Forever blind

Love is not only blind but is for the luck and brave....It seems that you have all of your bases covered.....well done

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

fortes fortuna adiuvat:) Thank you Rico:)

[Writer_next_door]

I really liked your poem. It had been a while since I read a love poem without any heartache. It gave off a lyrical vibe, giving to me, an illusion of a love song.
Great job.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

LOVE is not always about heartache and pain..LOVE is supposed to be about happiness beyond our possible imagination:) and it is indeed a song:P thank you anne:)

[Dayran]

Psyche saw the face of Eros ... and saw him for what he was ... inside. He grabbed her and dashed up the mountain ... where he lived with her ... only she and him. But why did he dash off after she saw him for what he is? A poem with the inquiries of a sphinx.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Brilliant that you were able to connect my song to that myth...thank you very much dayran

[T. Adams]

I enjoyed that this poem was not about how difficult, depressing, and woeful love can be. Thank you for sharing.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Love is not always melancholic tiffany:) thanks for stopping by and following me on twitter:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful hope and needs in the poetry.
"All we need is you and me
Just you and me"
I like how you gently took the reader to good places and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

thank you very much coyote:) Coming from you it really means a lot to me:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Deepika]

Lovely piece. Good job (y)

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you very much deepika:)

[prachi prangya agasti]

I love the way it started nd definitely its an impressive piece loved the feeling that engulfed me

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Glad to hear prachi:) Thanks:)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Beautiful poem.... good one...

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thanks again anurag:)

[R Smith]

beautiful in its simplicity, that's not a criticism i mean it as a compliment, great writing Jerald :)

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you very much for your kind words:) receiving a compliment from you might mean....I'm on the right track:)

[R Smith]

your a long way down the right track already :)

[Falling Leaf.]

Like the "I need you by my side!", kind of wakes the reader up with a mental punch, a sweet and adoring piece. Thanks for sharing~

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Anytime:) Thank you:)