Just You... Just Me:)

You & I

Let's chase these stars

One by one

Around the galaxies

Let's live our dreams

One by one

In an enchanted castle

One by one

Holding hands

Heavy hearts

Heavenly clouds

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Let's get back the time

One more time

Going backwards

Let's start the play

With nothing left to prove

Like the sparkling star

One by one

Holding hands

No more tears

No more fears

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Let's break free

One by one

From all our chains

Let's open our eyes

One by one

See more than what we can see

Forever kind

Forever blind

All we need is you and me

Just you and me

I need you by my side!

Even after years

We'll always be so close to tears

Just you and me!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

although on emotional level I can not relate this, however on a poetic level that is something different. there is innocence here that you have found and I myself have yet, So in an emotional way I am green with envy.

love these lines....

Let's break free
One by one
From all our chains

and

Forever kind
Forever blind

Love is not only blind but is for the luck and brave....It seems that you have all of your bases covered.....well done

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

fortes fortuna adiuvat:) Thank you Rico:)

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

You make me jealous every time to feel the emotions these love poems evoke whenever you write them. Though I cannot relate at all to what love feels like, I love how the innocence of the poem, as mentioned in another review, can give you a taste of what its like...which makes me want to seek it out so bad! good job with this!

[Lyricalfairydust]

Very deep and passionate, Brava! I didnt get it the first time i read threw it, because i read it to fast. But read it at a slower pace, and even say it allowed in a low voice and, you understand completely. Almost as if you feel what it would feel like to be in that moment/feeling you describe. Good job!

[brezybaby3]

I love it! It reminds me that it doesn't matter how long you have been in love it is always just the two of you. Even if you have kids. Great job.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

thanks brezzy:)

[buterfligirl]

Very nice. It's interesting how you broke from normal poetic structure by varying the number of lines in each stanza.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

thanks butterfligirl...i dont know much about the rules used...i just wrote what i felt:) but what i felt was long back...

[buterfligirl]

I don't mean to say that there are rules, just that it's different from the structure I usually tend to see in many poems

[Chain of Hearts]

I love this poem! When I just read the title, 'Just you...Just me :)', I already had a strong feeling that it would be a great piece.
Keep writing!

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

thank you so much chain of hearts:)

[Chain of Hearts]

No problem :D

[gabiaimee]

Simple and sweet, lovely write! I love the imagery in the first few lines, and I find this to be very relatable [by experience, of course].

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

glad you are able to relate to this song gabiaimee:) thanks:)

[Patricia]

"Forever kind, forever blind" I really love this line. Nice work, for me it almost sounds like a song. Maybe someone will write a melody to this, I would want to hear it

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

I wish someone would write a melody too:) Anyone out there??? thanks patricia:)

[Patricia]

It has one of these soothing vibes, which would go perfect with light deep house. If I would be any good in writing melodies haha. No problem I love your peotry!

[Ruth]

Ahh, lovely, vibrant and heartfelt :) xo

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thanks for your heartfelt comment popps:)

[shasha]

A good and well-written poem. i like it.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thanks shasha:)

[Saddam]

With nothing left to prove
Like the sparkling star
One by one
Holding hands

Beautiful write dear friend.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you for your kind words friend:)