In Search Of Salvation

This isn't a song or a poem. These are just synchronized words from an unsynchronized heart of a space traveler, travelling through darkness, alone and beyond boundaries in a near impossible mission of a search for an elixir, the only thing that can cure his comatose love. 

This an open-hearted, emotional journey into the unknown emotional quotient called Love, which raises and answers in its own logic the questions that human kind is yet to find answers to in real life. 

Love not only unites people but also separates them!!!

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I’m in this great star ship 

Flying 

Very far 

Very fast

Very sober 

Breaking barriers 

Reaching stars 

Knowing the unknown 

Counting my moments 

Torn apart by gravitational forces 

I’m in a place with no faces 

With the properties of a black hole rotating 

Your face is the only thing dictating 

I’m just an atom 

Drifting Alone 

Being Desperate 

Transcending time and space 

Clinging on to just one thing 

You!! 

In this environment

Filled with peace 

Trouncing me to pieces

I wonder 

I Fear 

What would hurt the most? 

Being the one who leaves everything behind 

Or 

The one that remains when everything leaves 

Living in memories that tranquil in circles around you 

Or 

Making new ones with the deep-rooted still suffocating on the inside 

This is not a question of when 

This is a question of If 

If I'll be inhaling the same oxygen as you 

If I'll be sharing my molecules with you

If I'll be looking into the clusters in the black of your eye 

If I’ll be able to feel your hand on my heart 

We used to look up at the sky 

Wondering our places 

Now I'm here in the sky 

Looking down 

I know my place 

Is right beside 

You! 

But every time 

I see the suns 

The stars 

The light

They aid as buoyant remnants 

That no matter how dark things get 

The dawn will come 

And 

I will find my way back to you 

Yes! 

In this rigid adventure of tearing down linearity 

Travelling between limited narrow passages of shallow thoughts 

I will unlock the mysteries 

Of this dimensional manipulation 

And 

We will escape our doomed destiny 

And 

Cross the pseudo-philosophical wave of time, space and gravity 

My love is immortal 

In every minute particle that exists in this universe 

And the cosmoses beyond 

I’m in search of a salvation for you 

But my personal salvation is and always has been You!

© 2013 Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ana B.]

A very beautiful masterpiece, absolutely genial thoughts and lyrical emotions. A must have for my library
Great job JIJ :)

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thanks Anna:) And I love you coining my name as JIJ :P

[Jenny Kort]

Thats very good I liked it this was an enjoyable piece of writing

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you Jenny:)

[The Black Warrior]

What would hurt the most?




Being the one who leaves everything behind

Or

The one that remains when everything leaves




Living in memories that tranquil in circles around you

Or

Making new ones with the deep-rooted still suffocating on the inside
^Thought provoking :D

My love is immortal

In every minute particle that exists in this universe

And the cosmoses beyond

^ Beautiful!!!

I find this poem very romantic and breath taking

Nicely done LD

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

You seem to love this very much I guess :P I'm humbled. Thank you:)

[The Black Warrior]

Indeed, and no problem...any time :D

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

I LOVED IT!!! I loved the flow and words selection!! Very well donee!! W

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you amulya:) glad you liked it!!!

[xbxbzdvdsv]

I'm mind blown... I only wish I could of wrote this :p amazing, I understand this, I had someone in mind. This is an AMAZING poem! I'm glad you requested me to read it, great job! Oh my goodness. I loved it.

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Thank you very much indeed:) Yes!!! i was forced into writing this, as someone I loved suffered from an incurable disease and those were the times I went in search for a miracle, but sadly the end result made me realize that reality is far away from fantasy :(

[The Black Warrior]

miracles are not fantasy my dear! :D

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

In this world we live, miracles have indeed become a fantasy my lady:)

[The Black Warrior]

I very much disagree again my dear, for I am a living miracle and no, I am not trying to boast. but I do have a story and I know many other lives stories :D I strongly believe in the power of faith, hope, love, and prayer... :D

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

I do emphasize on faith, love and prayer too, my lady!!! But miracle is a happening that cannot be explained by the philosophical or a scientific viewpoint. With due respect, I still believe that lack of miracles(excluding you:P) outweighs and thus it is just a fantasy for many( I'm not stressing myself here:P)

[The Black Warrior]

I agree with you...miracle is a happening that cannot be explained by the philosophical or a scientific viewpoint. < but so is that what makes it a fantasy?? not trying to change your mind my dear just trying to understand I guess.. or I don't... okay never mind... this is happening to me lately LOL but I rather speak than to be quiet... :D sorry if I am of any bother to you... truly isn't my intention...just pointing that out :P

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

You are bothering me:P lol:) I love having such conversations:)

[The Black Warrior]

Oh no! I'm so sorry!! hehehe glad to hear that :))

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

That was intended to be sarcasm :P

[The Black Warrior]

I know dear LOL that is how I took it ;P

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

glad to know... for a moment I thought you were tracking my IP address down and on your way to murder me:P lol:)

[The Black Warrior]

hahahaha....well you know...I can that! LOL I'm just saying that cuz my major is IT yes... I'm a pretty geek LOL pretty?? hahaha talking about humbleness...

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Ha Ha:) Maybe for you saying 'pretty' is a modest thing to say as 'alluring' would have been the right word.

[The Black Warrior]

hahaha hum hum... I am flatter hahaha I like to be mysterious though... I don't know so much about been seductive though... I don't even know how to flirt which I find it to be super cute hahaha innocent I guess is the right word...

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Innocence coupled with mystery is kind of seductive by itself, you don't have to worry about it:)

[The Black Warrior]

haha I won't worry... I never do hahaha now that my friend is a lie LOL huh! how could I?
read morehaha I won't worry... I never do hahaha now that my friend is a lie LOL huh! how could I?

sorry don't mind me lol

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

It's fine:) It's completely fine:)