Asked & Answered~262

Asked & Answered~262

A Story by JD Major
"

...a one-sided deal ...in 12 lines

"
The Confessional

"I spend way too much time fantasizing about women, Father."
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"Me too."
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" ...Huh?"
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" ...Me too."
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" ...But, you're not supposed to do that, are you Father?"
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"You neither."
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"But, how can you forgive me for something you do too."
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"Who said I was going to forgive you?"
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" ...Because that's what we do. I confess, and you forgive me." 
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"Kind've a one-sided deal, dont'ya think?"
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"I hadn't really thought of it that way before, Father. I forgive you."
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"Me too you."
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© 2024 JD Major


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This is a very clever piece; expectations do not always come true, especially when both of you (sinned)
So the best thing to do is to forgive each other.... i loved the conversation between you and the priest...
creative....
warmly,
B


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JD Major

5 Months Ago

Thanks so much Betty! :)
Betty Hermelee

5 Months Ago

A pleasure indeed🌷
Warmly,, B

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JD Major
JD Major

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