Melted Loom

Melted Loom

A Poem by JDLacson
"

when someone assumes to be understood... i tried though. tbh.

"



Untamed and ambiguous

Passion that defied logic

Emotions Imitating Midas touch

Seeking answers

 

Bunting curved balls

swinging between strikes

self assuring touch

seeking truth

 

catch me if you can

you better understand

‘you’re trying to be one

Is it the answer?

 

Mystified but not clarified

Precise but defies

Demise can’t compromise

Are you ready to rise?

 

Why???

© 2017 JDLacson


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Powerful passion but against with your emotions.
But happiness therein.
Seeking answers but doesn't know "how?"

You were looking for someone who will fully understands you and willing to be your happiness.
You found her.

But the question is... Is she your happiness ?
Will she understand you ?
Will she catch you ?

She did. You think she was. But it turns out into confusions.
It was not all clarified. You did not had a closure. You we're both confused with your feelings.

It was an UNTOLD LOVE STORY.
FEELINGS that turned out into a
MELTED LOOM.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A person who is trying to comfort'seek his own self and feelings because of the past things he done and can't change it as the time goes by.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful passion but against with your emotions.
But happiness therein.
Seeking answers but doesn't know "how?"

You were looking for someone who will fully understands you and willing to be your happiness.
You found her.

But the question is... Is she your happiness ?
Will she understand you ?
Will she catch you ?

She did. You think she was. But it turns out into confusions.
It was not all clarified. You did not had a closure. You we're both confused with your feelings.

It was an UNTOLD LOVE STORY.
FEELINGS that turned out into a
MELTED LOOM.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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JDLacson
JDLacson

Dumaguete City, Christianity, Philippines



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