No Clue

there are many questions that we tend to ask. but there always a time when the answers we expect are far different from the real ones.

Everything about us was just perfect

You and I, love is our main subject. 

You said you will always protect 

Our love that no one could reject. 

But honey those words were a bluff

They don't even mean just a drop 

I hope I could just take a nap 

And all these feelings will just stop. 

Your Iloveyous  were my everything

My heart skips a beat when I see you smiling. 

How could you do this to me

I'm bleeding can't you see?

I asked you to go

To disappear like i didn't even know

But to my surprise you said, 

''as you wish, I'll just go'' 

You broke my heart

You stabbed it with a dart

You crumpled it as if it is like a paper

if that makes you happy, just hurt me harder

Then suddenly I saw you with someone new

Is she the reason why you were so blue?

Is she the reason why you treated me with the coldest side of you?

Why did you do this? I have no clue...

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

A honest message here. Most people would have much harsher words for a past love. My take on all of it, romantic love comes and goes. But when to you do finally meet that person, everyone else will disappear, and you'd do anything for them. Anything.

Regardless, great work, I like to read things that are emotional and raw. "I loves you" needs an extra space, btw. But keep it up. You rock! :)

[JDF]

thank you so much! I dont know though. i do want to write something like a poem made from bitterness. it turned out like that so! thank you c: