Risky

Risky

A Poem by J.Carnevale
"

im confused and full of fear.

"

I sink to the floor,

my once light soul broken.

It lays there lifeless.

I lay there searching,

waiting for it to show some sign of life.

But there is nothing.

I shut my eyes,

wanting so desperately to cry.

But I have no tears left.

The darkness seems to swallow me.

thump...

My eyes shoot open.

A small light was illuminating the room.

My hope,

My soul.

I sit up and stare at it.

I feel a slight sense of hope,

but it couldn't be.

I know now this is a last chance,

my final try.

I have a little hope left.

But as I reach for this hope,

I feel already that it could take a turn for the worst.

I take a risk,

not sure what is right.

but how much more can my aching heart take,

before I become completely lost in the darkness?

 

 

 

© 2013 J.Carnevale


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Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will relate to your work, you my friend are great writer better shin rather than staying in darkness!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I feel like this and I hope you make your way out of the darkness

Posted 10 Years Ago


The way we think has a lot to do with our outcomes. Being able to discipline our minds is challenging when we're so ensconced in the darkness. I wish you luck.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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J.Carnevale
J.Carnevale

Richmond, RI



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I Live in the smallest town in the smallest state in one of the biggest countries. I enjoy writing poems. perhaps one or two stories to be told as well. I love to make new friends and hear what they h.. more..

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Broken Broken

A Poem by J.Carnevale