Beautiful Night

Just Whimsey

Beautiful Night

Beautiful Moon

Beautiful Moment

Beautiful Boy

 

First Look

First Dance

First Touch

First Kiss

 

One Soul

One Heart

One Body

One Love

 

Beautiful Boy

Beautiful Moment

Beautiful Moon

Beautiful Night

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It's short and sweet and so beautifully romantic.

[Mark Pearce]

JC �

I like the simplicity of this�allowing the reader to fill in the details.

The repeating stanza is appropriate and provides a closure.

Well crafted.

[rumpulpulsky]

by far one of my favourite life songs

[Melody P-]

this is.."beautiful"**
I enjoy the shortness when it's meaningful like this..it does tell a story and written well:)
Great Write!!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I like the circular nature of the poem. Though brief, it tells a complete story quite nicely. I admire your willingness to experiment. I am so stiff and rigid with my poetry.

[Legion]

Whimsical. :)