Am I?

Am I?

A Poem by Julio Cesar Ruiz
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Something to get you thinking about what you are if you think.

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Cogito ergo sum,

I think therefore I am,

but if I am therefore I feel,

but what I feel am I?

When I feell happy I am,

when I feel good I am,

but when I feel anger am I?

when I feel hate am I?

If I feel eveil am I?

© 2009 Julio Cesar Ruiz


Author's Note

Julio Cesar Ruiz
So what do you think? are we what we feel all the time?

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hmm that is a pretty difficult question to answer... I guess it all depends on what choices you make...if you make an evil choice, that doesn't necessarily mean that you're evil, it just means that you are being evil. Everyone makes bad choices. A bad choice could even be something as choosing to feel jealousy or hate... We do have the power to control our own emotions...or at least just "restrain" them. "Mind over heart," I guess.... That's just my input. I have no idea what I'm talking about. :)
I like your poem! I really like how it starts, too.
It's a good self-analysis and calls all to really question themselves.
Great job!!!
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!!!
-Alaska Frost :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Kudos me like me like mucho! Its like a funny but deep lymric in the way its formatted.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Julio Cesar Ruiz
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