A Waste of Time

 

Today I decided to be random

Just throw in a lot of words

To make it look like a poem

So then my thoughts could be heard

 

I am tired of the I LOVE SO AND SO

And the I’m in love with so and so

Who cares

It’s the f*****g internet

Things change especially if you never met

 

I’m waiting for the happy place

And it just doesn’t seem to be coming

An attention span of a goldfish

Are you listening yet?

Are you reading?

 

I am doing this to get your attention

And maybe to waste your time

Oh look here is another useless line

Now that you have read it and I had my little rant

Go rate this poem

And don’t tell me you can’t

Author's Note

I just wanted to waste your time and mine with a piece that sort of rhymes

Reviews

[E. M. Murren]

Well, this work was a surprise. It seems to be a statement, but I fear I am not sure what you wanted to say... are you insulting us or the internet? I like your style... you are bold with your writing. You also show many moods. Cheers.

[jeRRy.whaLLey]

this is a play and like all plays you've caught the reader in your net of disbelieving, weaving with metaphors and wit and a voice jaded with 'I don't care' makes this an Art piece and a dare - I recall using my reviews as the basis of some of my Poetry here and it would 'come off' as a piece about this and that and folks look out of their own windows to see - so now I'll rate this JC

[So sad to be forgotten]

The font is kind of hard to read but another great piece

[SweetPeachesAlways]

An attention span of a goldfish - oh, I got it, BBB! Trust me, I got it! What was your point is the question I have now???? You didn't waste my time, not even a little bit...

[Nicholas Hallows]

I always enjoy poetry about poetry so am happy to waste my time reading it. And it does sort of rhyme, so mission accomplished. :)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Oh no this wasnt a waste of time! It was a pleasurable rant to read.

[Marie]

Nice. Hot nasty. LOL!