Mother

Just some random thoughts it could pertain to mother earth or that lady that burst you from her loins

 

Making sure we’re always safe

Often never realizing their smothering mistakes

Thinking that sometimes she never cared

Hating, loving, resentful her feelings spared

Either here or there or everywhere she knows 

Resentful sometimes our love or hate for mother shows

 

 

Mother’s milk is our life

Mother is our keeper and his wife

Sometimes we never knew her well

Sometimes Mother put us through hell

 

No, matter how you spell it

In any language, Mother means life

Her tender mercies

Her harsh words

No matter how mother was

 

She gave birth

She guides us

Nourishes earth

Mother

 

She can be our own flesh and blood

A friend

Or Gaia the mother of the planet

Either way

Mother never gets treated how she should

 

 

Author's Note

Just some randomness that I was thinking about

Reviews

[DeeDee Kaulitz]

I liked the pictures can't really say that I enjoyed the flow that much, this is poetry?

[Karen Raquepo]

thanks for this share.Very demanding flow.

[So sad to be forgotten]

Actually is the H supposed to be in that spot?

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I like it...thought-provoking...beautiful write.

[mattavelli]

This is great!!
Let's be nice to nature.
Have fun. :)

[Brenda Sue]

Very nice, very nice indeed. Beautifully penned.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

J-

What is up with Red Angel: "Very nice, sissy." Lmfao! She might be worried that you are honing in on her hallowed ground of acrostics! That was just a funny comment!

It was a very nice poem!

-Gabe

[VERONICA]

AWWW- SAD!! I love the last line "mother never gets treated the way she should." I enjoyed it and love the message and thought it was well written.

However I did not like the line "Resentful sometimes our love or hate for mother shows." It didn't make sense and sounded like Yoda. And the "Or Gaia the mother of the planet." line seemed out of place- I'd advies taking out "Gaia" and just going with "Or the mother of the planet."

Well done.

[Marie]

Very nice, sissy. 'Burst from her loins??' You do have a way with words, don't you? LOL.