Snow

Snow blowing against trees

Storm came quickly

Drowning the world in white

Such a pretty sight

Author's Note

LOL ok so not a haiku now that its been pointed out ^_^

Reviews

[mattavelli]

There's no snow outside. Also, this is so totally not a haiku, like oh my god. Maybe it's an emo haiku, seriously. I don't believe you actually used the word SUCH. That is so 1997, seriously. And what's with the blowing? Wow, talk about a nature lover, like wow!!

[Constance]

Not a Haiku, but nice all the same.

[James K. Blaylock]

Awesome piece, you got my vote!

jkb

[lowena]

Very sweet poem. I love how the snow makes everything so beautfiul too.

[Runa]

Short and sweet, I like it! Reminds me of how it looks outside in my town. Excellently written and it describes the winter nature very well!

[So sad to be forgotten]

sweet poem

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Good short little poem. If only we had some snow.

[So sad to be forgotten]

it is almost like a short Robert Frost poem

[ah]

beautifully written, great write, thanx for sharing

[Shalini R]

thats cool
not really a haiku
a traditional haiku has got a 5-7-5 sylable count for each line for 3 lines. its usually about nature, so thats on target. but its a nice read