I'm your Disease

 

Our eyes meet across the room

Fireworks

Explosions

A passion blooms

 

Things move fast and no one knew

How the crazy thing called love grew

Things change and I’m sad to say

But I’m bored with you and you need to go away

 

Don’t give me the kicked puppy look

I never knew that I could get you off the hook

Under your skin I’m like a disease

Begging

Pleading

On your knees

 

Please don’t do that you’re just looking pathetic

Go to rehab babe just forget me just forget it

I know I’m intoxicating and I make you high

Oh no not again

Please don’t cry

I am in your brain like a cancer

But being this pathetic isn’t the answer

Once I’m in your veins you need a twelve step program

I’m your new drug

Your sickness

Your desire

I set your blood

Your soul on fire

 

But you failed my test and now I moved on

You’re still clinging to hope

Still listening to our song

I grew bored

Its as simple as that

There’s no chance in Hell I’ll be taking you back

 

It’s Valentines Day and I pity you

Home alone crying

Wondering what did you do.

It’s just how I am I grow bored very easy

Realize this it ain’t easy being sleazy

 

 

Reviews

[Prose-full]

sweet bitter flow--> sh** i love it.......[i need those exact words myself..i can not tell this woman enough..it's not.gonna.happen......all together..just like that]
but...dam, girl...love this one....love the "energized flow"
write that write girl...

[Dead Angel]

very great flow and even though this was a mean poem, i loved it. its rare when you read a poem through the heartbreaker's point of view. great job!! :)

[Gaia the Nature Woman]

I loved the flow of this it was an assault to the senses

[Accidental Stranger]

Great rant the writing sort of hurt my eyes

[ah]

wow, this is going into my library, great writing, i enjoyed it thoroughly, keep writing.... i really enjoyed the in ur brain like cancer, thats a great metaphor

[Danielle Asher]

i really appreciate real raw work. this piece is great. laying it all out there about how you feel. Even allowing yourself to express a certain cockiness (if that is a word) about his addiction to you because we need to allow ourselves that when we feel it. Great write.

[Sexy Jones]

This reminds me of a recent breakup from my boyfriend of 8 years.
It's amazing.
I keep coming across beautiful literature that makes me reminisce.

Thank you.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

" I know I'm intoxicating and I make you high....Once I'm in your veins you need a twelve step program "

I love this little paragraph! Too sweeeeeeet!
Very good flow! Excellent Valentine's day poem!

[Tamme]

The cold honest truth... I love it! This line here:
Things change and I'm sad to say
But I'm bored with you and you need to go away

Is priceless! But, unfortunately, it's never that simple. Good writing:)

[Cerulean Kitty]

Rather cold type of poem, isn't it? Nonetheless, I enjoyed reading it. I'm just a sucker for poetry, I suppose. Though, you may want to revise and remove the Javascript as it seems to not be working. Still, it's a good poem. No structural errors, just legibility. The font and size hurt my eyes. Maybe "small" size font and a less flashy font. I have odd eyes, I suppose. Anyway, thanks for sharing! And... Happy Valentine's Day.