Cover Your Mouth When You Speak

Cover Your Mouth When You Speak

A Poem by Preposterous
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Nursery Rhyme

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Cover your mouth when you speak

Ignorance is contagious

It cripples and blinds the uneducated
Those who have not been vaccinated
By the volumes of science read, not dictated

Cover your mouth when you speak

Your podium, an amplifying tool
That calls the sheep into Sunday school
And helps politicians to play the fools

Cover your mouth when you speak

Lest you seek to ruin or flaw
Those chronicled and precious natural laws
By waggling that hideous worm inside your jaw

Cover your mouth when you speak

© 2008 Preposterous


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This poem probably has the best auditory effect I've seen for a long time. Reading it aloud, I naturally go for a rather bold, declamatory voice during the three-line stanzas, but go soft during the one-lines - an effect which works to the poem's advantage and is not something I artificially forced. The poem itself is very focussed and sharp as sword, helped by the very strong and consistent rhyming scheme. Knowledge is power, but false knowledge is false power; one must be sure to extoll the first, and condemn the second. A good read and a good poem, most definately! =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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VERY THOUGHT PROVOKING AND REALLY A GREAT CONCEPT THOSE FIRST LINES ARE MY FAVORITE.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha! I have a long list of public and religious figures I'd like to send this to. However, I can't imagine they'd understand, considering how inflated their self-importance is.

In one fail swoop, you have managed to capture all our views, giving an eloquent voice to our thoughts. Just magnificent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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we are compelled to follow the masses..a poignant message to think before you open your mouth..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

succinct and aphoristic. i agree 98% of the population are sheep. this is an astute commentary on society today. just like the saying goes: who speak knows not, who knows speak not. great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem... flows really nicely. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lovely poem! Great, effortless rhyming.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so truthful and couldn't agree with you more.
Loved the rhyme scheme and flow as well. Awesome write
that speaks so much truth!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is the best example of repetition I have everrr seen. THis is a great example. I love this poem. It's motives are true and ti poses a good point. The rhyme was great, it really flowed and it was just generally a great poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

powerful message and insight. beautifully done, mary

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this. (: The rhyme was flawless and never sounded awkward. This would definitely be fun to recite to a few people, who think they know everything. :P Great job! ^_^

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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