writing at pillows cafe

little ode to community

Aren’t we a bunch of stories waiting to collide with another to make sense, words and phrases spread over a table, puzzles pieces beaten apart by a baby kid? Sometimes lucky sometime missed, each in a way wondering around, writing. Yes writing a lot.

So you are checking your watch again, confirming is pass midnight and here you are alone, you and your words, your pillow, a closed window, figuring out how you happen to not understand, but we don’t understand, that’s our thing. If one thing set someone apart is not to understand, driving us further, away, where is alone.  Writing, over reading, and re-writing again.

 

Is way past midnight and I got a feedback, from someone, must likely from really far away, I mean, continentally away,and I realize we are just a bunch of stories waiting to collide.

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Reviews

[Shannon]

"Stories waiting to collide" excellent phrase. I feel like it could be a taking off point for another piece, perhaps?

[J.Arthur.B]

it might, is more like a open door to writers interaction which always lead to new pieces.
thanks for reviewing

[Stan Lee]

I like it. I remember how excited I was to receive my first ever review :)
Your write reminds me of the 6 degrees of separation thing. How distant.... but close interests :)

[alanwgraham]

Yes. It is really quite amazing that we are all bumping our words to and fro to people we don't even know each other's names.. quite often revealing our innermost thoughts. It is a good thing and we mainly support each
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