Missing You

It feels like more than forever
But too long, nonetheless
I can feel you smile
That smile sometimes devious
Lurking about with the cuteness
Your eloquent words
So soft with intellect, yet
Full of strength and power
Almost commanding
Shivers with excitement
To hear you
A willingness to submit
Over and over
Again and Again
If only to dine with you
In rapturous delight!
I can only imagine
To feel one another
Without a touch
Is to go beyond
What is unimaginable
OH! The wait intense
But tolerable

Author's Note

Tried to express what it may be like, waiting for someone you haven't seen in a long time. And the longer the wait, the more patience is tested, yet endured successfully. I may want to revisit this one later ;)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

ohh this is so nice..lots of depth in here..
i could feel your words ,a mixture..
you shake yet i feel the strength in voice
and i react ,i shiver ,look stunned
oh if i could feel you like that for hours
time will stop ,i feel your strength
you give me happiness..everything
in you ,your words ,your mind,your might
beauty always shine on me,you are a mystery to other
but not to me ,i read you well,could you read me too
this was so wonderful ,yes it need some more work
thoughts here could flow to no end
you started something..talk mind to mind..no words
lovely write..

[I Am Svetlana]

Haha, I am totally relating to this...I haven't seen one of my friends in about a year because I've gone off to college, but I've decided to wait for him and yes, it is very difficult to wait and be patient for someone you haven't seen in about forever. But he has a gf now and we're in a fight, so we don't talk anymore. Anyways, tha'ts not the point of my review...I've learned that you can't spend forever waitiing, but wait for a good time and then you have to learn to move on.

[Hello, Goodbye]

very good and I like its flow