Redeemer

For too long they've waited
For when it was their moment
To have and to hold
Estranged forever
By the loneliness
Sadness, anguish, heartache
An unbearable curse
Immortal Sins between
Bound them
To a world so cruel
They're spent
When all hope seems lost
Redemption is nigh
All hangs in the balance
Which lies only in their hands
The fight has already begun
Do you understand?

Reviews

[Michael X]

i feel the meaning of this poem" the fight has already begun" to keep love and
hold it close to the heart, as all hangs in the balanced, the risks the rewards,
Redemtion is nigh".. wow that is amazingly powerful like the rest of the poem.
full of emotions, sadness, heartbreak and ultimately disaster,
then ascension it all weaves together so brilliantly, beautiful work

[Crow]

I adore this piece, it has wonderful flow and symbolism.