Asylum

I wrote this to describe how a song made me feel while listening to it.

Anticipation and curiosity
Pandora
On the ready to hear his words
Opening the steel, cardboard doors

Curiosity at best
Until the flow of the rest
When heavy, his soul weighed
All around her to fade

And wonder soon fled
The more his soul bled
Heart flutter

And pierce her inner being
This gift, shared so freely!
Rising everfast
Welled up tears
Built the pressure
Empathic reciprocation

Sadness unlike any other
Self-experienced
The vibrato accented
Ebbing and flowing
An addition to his passion
A message in need of release

Unable to touch him
Longing to defeat his pain
Unyielding determination
To protect his fire

Finally settle the angst

Reviews

[Michael X]

I really think the title is artful, and what's appealing is the messege can apply to the indivisual reader in a way that allows it to be personalized to interpretation, an ode to affection and longing, such poems can be tasted in determination. and the ending line, "angst" perfect ending. every absolute line speaks so well I as each sentence stands alone, You are just an absolute wiz when it comes to poetry and passion, and themes. phenomonal job

[Crow]

Lovely truth, exemplifies how helpless we can be.

[Vanna Renee]

(:
You used musical adjectives!!!!
Yay(:
sorry this makes me very happy haha
This was great(:
I understand where you're coming from.
It's very deeply written rather than lightly written like most people do.
Great job,
With all hopes,
Agnes