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A Poem by J.

Souls united throughout time
Rhythm and Rhyme combined
Shadows cast tinge of distance
That which believe victory
To claim no random soul
However, relentless they try
To thwart a destined merging
Of one flame burning ever brightly
Which will never cease to burn
In the ever passionate desire
Of a melodic marriage
That signs their demise
A seal of pre-written fate

© 2010 J.


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Breathtaking!! loved this poem, every word is grammatically enhanced to
logical simplicies and the meaning is easy on the mind to interpret,
a poem from the muses own heart, your work blows me away.
It's classic and Shakespeare could not have devised the blueprint of love
with such passion .. you are the Poetess of Passion my friend, thank you for
enchanting the experience..Top Notch

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful Mysticism.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfully put in such a small but lager then
life write...Nicely Done J.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breathtaking!! loved this poem, every word is grammatically enhanced to
logical simplicies and the meaning is easy on the mind to interpret,
a poem from the muses own heart, your work blows me away.
It's classic and Shakespeare could not have devised the blueprint of love
with such passion .. you are the Poetess of Passion my friend, thank you for
enchanting the experience..Top Notch

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very emotional Jee, short it may be, but the message is very clear! I love your work Sweetie :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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J.
J.

Woodsfield, OH



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