Vibrant Reaction

A play on the mind. Curious if the reader will get what is conveyed. ;) Nothing is what it seems.

Pushing up from the cold warmth
So carefully tucked around and above me
Stretching new and naked
Exposed by your light
And I smile as I finally unfold
Desperately reaching up and out
To drink what you have to offer
And I bask in delight
Tingling one molecule at a time
And all at once a colorful vision
Giving me strength
So inviting your thrust
This orgasmic, organic response
Somehow you invoke within me
An unseen, whimsical display
An unheard cracking through the dawn
Welcoming me every morning
With great anticipation
I long for
Awaiting the deep warm embrace
My leaves openly invite his kiss
And branches grow higher
Within the arms of Ra

Reviews

[Michael X]

invigarating passion set to sensuous ascention, i love the way your pen traces
the poetic horizon of love and romance so artistically inventive and
reciprocating the embrace and all the encompasses a oneness in blossom
this is colorfully invisioned and lulling in tone and feature, brilliant work!

[Everett DeValle]

WOW...Deep...and sensual...Brilliant flow...it feels wonderful when you can feel someone's embrace in mornings, especially, someone you really cared about...it was like a voyeur peeping into this very intimate moment. Awesome.

[Charles]

Very titillating, J. You tell quite the tale. Nice read.

[Chilson, Joshua]

You write of the welcoming sun which is always with us each morning is my thought, though this also reminds me of coffee in the morning for some odd reason lol. You know me though, I am random, full of thought, and this is my opinion :P. Great poem, though if I am correct you clearly state the sun in it's spiritual name.

[D.R. Wilsey Jr.]

The first line seems so weak against the backdrop of the rest of the piece which I think carries a good idea and some interesting imagery and word choice.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Beautiful words..sensual and a great liquidity of words,they flowed with much ease.

[Dream Weaver]

Enchantingly exquisite... Love it....

[Holly]

Wow Janee, very deep and intense :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

glorious descriptive of celestial kiss upon nature's blush~