Grains of Sand
A Poem by J.
 Written in '02 
Just when you believe You have it all in your hands Fast it slips away
© 2010 J.
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the moment of belief becomes the moment of tragedy, grains of sands,
fast it slips away, its like having the world in the palm of the hand and the moment it is taken for grantite, its lost, perhaps forever, i loved the spirit
of haiku flowing throw the words, such an enlightening sense of wonder.
excellent job on this poem J, your talent flows off the page
Posted 14 Years Ago
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the moment of belief becomes the moment of tragedy, grains of sands,
fast it slips away, its like having the world in the palm of the hand and the moment it is taken for grantite, its lost, perhaps forever, i loved the spirit
of haiku flowing throw the words, such an enlightening sense of wonder.
excellent job on this poem J, your talent flows off the page
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on September 8, 2010
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J.Woodsfield, OH
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A woman who loves art in many forms. I prefer writing, music, drawing, painting and Photography. I have come to realize this world is a game one must master to win. And in this, life gives us tests we.. more..
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