Regret

Was once an Untitled poem, then I decided on this one

You pushed me away
Now it is my turn to do the same
You have no one to blame
But yourself anyway
Slowly again, walls are rising
Against the control I am despising

Reviews

[Kirbetsy]

Very emotional. You did a good job with the rhyme. It's not forced at all. Great poem.

[Gianna Perry]

Very emotional. Good job.

[Kasey Jones]

Short but powerful. You use rhyme without compromise meaning or using a forced rhyme, which can be a hard thing to do. Nice ending. This is a strong poem, with lots of passion.