Hollow

Hollow

A Poem by Rose Masen

You depart coldly
I'm catatonic
An unchanging immortal

© 2011 Rose Masen


Author's Note

Rose Masen
**Just wanted to bring this to attention. I've never experienced love- in either form- real or fake. I've just experienced traumatic situations. I'm just winging it while writing what Love feels like- true and pure, and fake and cold.**

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Short, but it gets the point across. Sorry that I haven't been on much. I have been really busy, and my account also got hacked on here. I have never really experienced love as well, but from what I have read about love poems it can be a good thing or a really bad thing. It has its benefits and its consequences. I personally experience love in a totally different way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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@ Anicca- Wow. Thank you, so much. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


These few words really struck a chord for me. To be able to create sheer genius in so few words proves your talent. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, but it gets the point across. Sorry that I haven't been on much. I have been really busy, and my account also got hacked on here. I have never really experienced love as well, but from what I have read about love poems it can be a good thing or a really bad thing. It has its benefits and its consequences. I personally experience love in a totally different way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. c: The title is perfect too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 1, 2011
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Tags: Depart, hurt, pain, cold

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Rose Masen
Rose Masen

Somewhere around here, FL



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