Hello. My name is....

Hello. My name is damaged.
My life cannot be salvaged.
I cannot be managed.

My mind in society would be banished.

Hello. My name is shattered.
My life has been battered.
I never really mattered.

My tortured soul is silver platter-ed.

Hello. My name is alone.
My existence is unknown.
I am depression prone.

My world has taken on a dark tone.

Hello. My name is unsealed.
My mind has quickly unreeled.
I see wounds unhealed.

My memories are unpeeled.

Hello. My name is broken.
My other half is woken.
I see my words unspoken.

My life is the game, my body the token.

Hello. My name is frightening.
My scars are quickly brightening.
I am silently suffering.

My airway is quickly tightening.

Author's Note

Just some random exploration....

Reviews

[Anicca]

Its an exploration... sometimes its fun just to experiment with rhyme and the result is unimportant. From what I have seen of you so far this isnt your strongest peice but its a bit different and interesting to read. I like it when things are a little original and quirky and this piece ticks both boxes.

[Antoñyo]

I'm lovin this piece. Dark and sad but written with brilliance and genuine talent
that makes one wanna shout:

Hello. My name is Peace
My friendship will not cease
I'll comfort like a fleece
My oh my, look at your smiles increase

Uh, yeah...something like that lol
Anyway, I liked this a lot!
Thanks

[Everett DeValle]

Como esta, Mami? I hope things are well, and that you are in good spirit.

I enjoyed your poem in its rhyme scheme....lovely and emotional...you captured your thoughts in words, in that period of time....hopefully, things are all good...I hate to see writers with fire not write anymore...the wick distinguished and not lit...a review for you, in hopes, you write soon, Rose.

~Ev