Endebted

Endebted

A Poem by Rose Masen

Blood, sweat, tears
I'm damned by dissipating time
Let me sign

© 2011 Rose Masen


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A very short poem. It just feels like it is missing more detail. Did you only intend to make the poem very short? It's a good start to what could be a powerful poem. Perhaps adding just a few more lines to the poem would really help to improve it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great emotions said in very few words. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on February 12, 2011
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Rose Masen
Rose Masen

Somewhere around here, FL



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I bury my inadequacies in my writing, and resurrect my confidence with my finished pieces. -Rose. more..

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A Poem by Rose Masen