Confusion....??

Confusion....??

A Poem by Rose
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Some quote/questions. They're deemed rhetorical; but feel free to answer them

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--> If the one, which whom you love, is damned by certain circumstances, yet you wish, against their wishes to experience what they are experiencing in order to remain with them, are you really damned, as well, by unnecessary sacrifice, or is it looked upon as a gain- never having to feel the pain of losing your beloved to unpleasant circumstances?

--> Ever wonder how someone that is suppose to be one of your first teachers and one of the few POSITIVE influences in your life aka the one who birthed you, could be your worst enemy? How can that "person" bring out the worst in you?

© 2011 Rose


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An Amazing poem that brings up alot of great points for a person to ponder. When I read this poem I was immediately drawn in. It draws a parallel to The Twilight Saga. Edward thinks he is damned, and that he doesn't have a soul. He thinks that turning Bella into a vampire would damn her as well, and he doesn't want to endanger her soul. Yet Bella is willing to give up everything just to be with him, and never having to lose him. This poem definitely brings up some very good points.

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Wow. Thought provoking, well versed. Impressive.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Very much of confusion I like it ;) Oh! & thanks for the nice reviews I really appreciate that... Thank you ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Thank you, guys, alot. It means so much to me that you all were able to almost see into my mind at the time in which I wrote this. You both are actually the only one's to understand it. Lol.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I agree 100% with Brandon, the Twilight Saga is a perfect example. Reading this definately made me think of a situation I am currently in. Do you let go and live a life of "what could have been?" or do you stay and go through the tribulations that is life. Your dammed if you do, dammed if you dont. Love this writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An Amazing poem that brings up alot of great points for a person to ponder. When I read this poem I was immediately drawn in. It draws a parallel to The Twilight Saga. Edward thinks he is damned, and that he doesn't have a soul. He thinks that turning Bella into a vampire would damn her as well, and he doesn't want to endanger her soul. Yet Bella is willing to give up everything just to be with him, and never having to lose him. This poem definitely brings up some very good points.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2011
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