Vivid Memories

Gifts of lies wrapped securely with bows of deceit,
Love grown from seeds of purity now at standstills of defeat.

Arising questions of past interactions,
Leaves the heart full of void and dissatisfaction.

Aching troubles rock the once solid foundation,
Mind full of assumptions, sound proof and hurtful deliberations.

Trust teetering between the threshold of remaining or departing,
Physical temptations of a permanent absence now starting.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Raw and poignant couplets that shows the range of emotions within a relationship...an Umami flavored in the corruptions of the soul. Nicely done, Rose.

[Rose Masen]

Why thank you ever so much. :}

[Everett DeValle]

You are most welcome, Rose. :)