So cold

So cold

A Poem by Rose Masen

A world so cold it sends chills down my spine
Screaming for the few seconds of everything being fine.

A body so cold, a shattered soul
Counting the days of again being whole.

I'm afraid for tomorrows emptiness
Everything is gone; no truth or righteousness.

The pieces of me dance in silhouettes
Teasing, yet pleading; nothing makes sense.

Ages and stages, trials and tribulations
My ragged being set for eternal damnation.

A sickened mentality overflowing levy's of sanity
Reoccurring memories thrashing at my lingering humanity.

Time ticks, I wonder alone, a heart beats against a hollow shell
Losing myself and my final remnants, drowning in a self- induced hell.


© 2013 Rose Masen


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Rose Masen
Comments. Please. :}

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Wow, so deep, Rose...I love the emotions...your rhyming couplets is superb...it's something I feel too...wonderfully scribed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose Masen

11 Years Ago

Thanks, hon. :}
Everett DeValle

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Rose. :)
awesome write...i love the rhyme and the flow of the poem....the poem in whole is a very nice read and projects your hard-labour while writing down this....amazing...thanks for sharing..

Posted 11 Years Ago


MMMmore like it!!! A chilling piece of confusion and deep unrest..makes the reader re-read, and think.
Loved it! Want more!!

Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tags: Pain, mental, torture, new, experimental, poem, dark, paralyzed

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Rose Masen
Rose Masen

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