Zero

Zero

A Poem by Jrocktothebeat
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Small entry about a moment in life.

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Return deposit for a better man
Broke her heart for a master plan
Still I see through this
Ignoring - Not Clueless
Hope it’s worth all you got
Won’t be there to help you up
Always loved you, but I’m ashamed
Feel the burn when I say your name

© 2015 Jrocktothebeat


Author's Note

Jrocktothebeat
Ignore grammar please. When I write songs or poems I just focus on finding the words. :)

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What you are saying, you lay right for all to see. You mention being ashamed that you will not be there to help.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the line ignoring- not clueless. This piece is very emotional and we'll laid out. Can't wait to see more from you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

solid strong and to the point, said with conviction..nice....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 6, 2015
Last Updated on April 6, 2015
Tags: Alcoholism, depression, mistakes, kin

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Jrocktothebeat
Jrocktothebeat

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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