BLUE

Something written laying on my back ....just taking in Gods handiwork

 

 

 

Amazng …Space

Amazing…. Sky

Amazing….Day

 

My time…

My moment…

As I just lay back …..and carpe’

 

I…. I-n-h-a-l-e  it

Till I taste it

Climb outside my self

Embrace it

 

Sunshine…….. like forever ….

And… forever……..Ever

Warms my face…

My belly

Like the perfect lover

 

Thinkin’ bout a bit of nothin’

A lil’ somethin’ BLUE

Borrowed from the very hands of God

 

BLUE….undefineable …blue

As far as I can …ever…imagine seeing

Or……..want to

A thousand hues…..dancin’ real close

 

“ Makes me wanna reach out ….and touch tomorrow”  ….kinda blue

delicate like powdered whispers

suspended softly from yesterday

 

It almost …..cools me

Just watchin’

 Perfect….

BLUE

Un….definable

Blow-my-mindable

BLUE

 

 

© 2004,©2007 J. Hampton [email protected]

 

 

 

Reviews

[Anthony D. Howe]

Beautiful. Your really have a way of just reveling in the moment. You might want to add a bracket at the begining of your first tag for center, just look at the begning of the poem and you will see wat I mean. Once again, I must tell you, I love how you are able to suck people in. i really felt like I was laying on top of a sunny hill with a cool breeze blowing across my face, staring at the sky, just drinking it all in.

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That was pretty powerful felt in peace . I can see it all as I read:) There is something great at being at peace. I really enjoyed this.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

J-

Nice work. You did a wonderful job of describing something so simple yet so complex that we see every day but rarely take the time to appreciate.

That reminds me of a place where you can watch the waves hit the rocks in a very special way over and over and over again.

-Gabe

[Emily B]

you have a beautiful way of describing all God's creatures. I love this one, somehow it was new to me.

[Celtic Cat]

Fantastic! From the funny picture which echoes your description...to taking me to a nice grassy bed, watching the clouds go by. Reminds me of a happier time, when I had my first apartment. Had bow windows which I put my couch in front of. Used to spend hours on that couch just watching the clouds pass by....
It's amazing the capacity your words have to stir my soul. This is such a simple piece, yet not. It's completely encompassing and universally understood. It's beautiful.

[Kitty]

OH wow. Can you hear
the
fingers
snapping
from a distance?....

yeah.right on.
The great Artist, ignites us with a just a lil' bit of....BLUE.

[Callie Anderson]

This poem makes me want to sing and dance around the room!! And I love the color blue so I really like this poem. This is something that needs to be framed and hung on a wall.


Callie A.

[Sharla Gentile]

I like the changes here . . . much more powerful and BLUE :) When I read the first poem, the color blue was what I had in my mind, the whole time. Nice to see it in print.

Gorgeous!

[Ghiasquared]

Your right, I liked this one better than #2. Great write.

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a wonderful piece and it make me want to grab everything I own that is blue and dance until I drop. this has an almost whimsical touch to it. Great piece.
Debby