Psalm in 10/40

For a contest.... to use 10 highlighted words ...plus a max of 30 more

 

In silent dance

of disciplined oblivion

Hands ...

like two great purposeful birds

In serene grace

 Perfume purer truths

 

Against the splendid ochre and merlot sky

Moonlight melts

into liqui- presence

reflection on a lake

of indigo glass

alms..

under the merciful canopy of God

 

 

 

 

Blesssssssssssss

© 2008 J.Hampton aka [email protected]

Author's Note

I'm trying to bust a block here !!!

Reviews

[Gandré]

Hello where have you been? I missed you. What a wonderful picture of yourself! I thought - I never can make poems by given words... I need to feel my words so I might be boring writing always round and round... but I love your way to be able to write from no thing - a beauty and challenge for my imagination... this was just wonderful. why don t you send it to www.alivenow.org ? I loved it. thanks for your review. don't disappear.. lara

[WordShifter]

Thank you for sharing all your beautiful poetry, please keep them flowing to us.
Aloha, Ginger

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice compose, lovely.

[Kitty]

And I am loving this. This shows your diversity and talent :) Any poem that ends with worship unto God is beautiful to me!

-M

[Emily B]

What block!?!?!? This is awesome. Pure refreshment for the poet soul.

[Helen Woodward]

Bust a block? Anyway you have met the criteria and done that with style and grace as always...I hope you win Jen:-)

[AK]

Oh my, this is really, realy nice. Skillfully done!