Completion

a bent,rusted snow shovel leans against the building

an effigy to winter

 

forsythia buds peek warily out at the overcast early Spring morning with

the yellow giggle of children

 

ravens sit in rigid rows across the top of the tomb

doves gracefully hover and flutter above

disregarding the dark harbingers below

 

awaiting the broken seal

for the Son to roll away the stone

and the Sun... will of course choreograph a symphony

when

"IT IS FINISHED"

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like the message behind this...love our Lord. The piece might benefit from an edit and proofread though. I'm sure you'll find the points in question. Good to see you here and hope your Easter Sunday is bountifully blessed by our living Lord. Peace, love and light.

[J. Hampton]

good to be here ...missed the WC...you especially Fabian
a horrible draft I know but ...a wonderful Blessed day to you as well

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wonderful piece with its analogy to Easter...that stone seems it will never be rolled away with the weather we are having here....Winter will not let go.

but there is always hope.

j.

[J. Hampton]

Thanks,
I'm in Fla. so I'm in flip flops n tanks but my hometown New Englanders echo your pain

[Gee]

I enjoyed the read, admire your faith but as a non believer struggle badly with the whole Jesus, God story.
Good morning

[J. Hampton]

I appreciate the read
never struggle with what someone else believes...
and never badly
be comfortable and solid knowing your absolute and how you stand

[Jimmy Yetts]

A magnificent depiction of an even more magnificent event.
Gratifying read, J.

[J. Hampton]

thanks for reading
magnificent event beyond anything

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A beautiful, poignant interpretation of the ‘final words’ for the redemption of humankind. Great write ….

[Levi Levin]

A great reminder of The Greatest Story Ever Told! Great work.

[Jacqueline Lopez]

I really admire how you use your words! I can tell you're a writer!

[Chris]

The heart-heard promise of Easter...

[J. Hampton]

Thank you for reading ...but most of all for understanding

[Chris]

sometimes we can DO understanding - when there is nothing at all else...