My Comedy and Tragedy Masks

My Comedy and Tragedy Masks

A Poem by J Todd Underhill
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12/28/2024

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The Pendulum swings and I try to dodge,

While dragging my personal ball and chain.

So many complaints my family has lodged,

He is not a poet, He is insane.

 

My mind is a force I cannot control,

I am tossed by the tide again and again.

With my two sides locked in a Super Bowl,

In a game that I feel no one can win.

 

I lay in my bed and think at night,

Why I can’t maintain like a normal guy.

Then I get up like now, I smoke and write,

An endless cycle and I don’t know why.

 

So, I gladly embrace my gift and curse,

 And I log my life out in line and verse.

 

12/28/2024

© 2024 J Todd Underhill


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Look at Bukowski: Why did Charles Bukowski stop writing?
Despite being published in Story magazine at just 24, Bukowski turned down an agent, believing he wasn't ready to be a writer and hadn't ``lived enough''. This lack of life experience and self doubt in promoting himself meant he made a conscious decision to stop trying.
DO NOT EVER STOP.

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1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's so often the Square Pegs in round holes who impress us!
Impressive write JT :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the title!

Love this! "The Pendulum swings and I try to dodge,

While dragging my personal ball and chain." KEEP WRITING! EXCELLENT!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bravo so bold what makes a poet a man is all ages great point great poem

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J Todd Underhill
J Todd Underhill

Denver, CO



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J Todd Underhill has been writing in the Denver Colorado since 1987. He has embraced poetics and spoken word art as his chosen art medium. He owned the title “Poet” in 2008 though his writ.. more..

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