Debonaire

I made this while listening to the song Debonaire by Dope. The story of a young poor Italian boy growing up in New York.

Debonaire

This story is a story of a debonaire named Vincenzo Ramone. Vincenzo Ramone grew up as a poor Italian boy in New york. He came to this country as an immigrant in 1899. He wasn't even one when his family and him came over here. Over the years though Vincenzo was determined to become a debonaire. He went around looking for change on the ground and when he was 10 got a job as a paperboy. Then at 14 got a job as a waiter at an Italian restaurant  called Zanfreddi's. He worked there for most of his life until he was 32 when the owner died and left him the restaurant. So after years of being poor, taking money off the ground, and delivering papers Vincenzo Ramone finally became what he always wanted to be ever since he was 10 a debonaire.

Author's Note

Please ignore any grammar problems. Please tell me what you think of this story.