Mystery Garden

Mystery Garden

A Poem by Izzy Insane
"

think about a moment of pure insanity and when everything around you starts becoming more secrective. its a lyrical symbol towards the end, paranoia the insanity have taken over.

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Verse 1:

In the garden where secrets sleep

theres an apple you cant eat

a truth which must be told

for a lie to unfold

 

Chorus:

vines growing on the garden fence

converging on what little is left

deadly embrace to show its love

deadly embrace to show her love

 

Verse 2

killers merging in my head

sent to murder me in my bed

leaving fakes to take the spotlight

how can you say whats wrong is right

 

Chorus:

 

Verse 3

somethings buried under the soil

someones buried alive

euthamisms all around me

can someone protect me

 

Chorus:

© 2012 Izzy Insane


Author's Note

Izzy Insane
its open to other valid interpretations

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I'd add 'please' in the last line after 'someone'... seems to fit well there. I really like the dark maiden in distress tone. Very gothic romance, victorian horror.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is actually really good! Its written extremely well . I love the use of metaphors.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm actually shocked at how good this is (no offence) :P I love the use of a garden to show the growth of the story. 'In the garden where secrets sleep' is my favourite line

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 19, 2012
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Izzy Insane
Izzy Insane

bit further, United Kingdom



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