Devour

April 10th 2010

The cuts get deeper,

My eyes no longer dry,

The tears awake me,

Now i see the other side.

 

No one can see it,

The life you ripped apart,

My bodies here alone,

Along with my torn and broken heart.

Reviews

[deeps]

Excellent rhyme scheme and flow going on here.
This is a wonderful write here I can really feel this one.
Hurts to have a heartbreak i know the feeling well.
Feelings very well expressed.