pain

A gift poem from Aethereal its great i want to share it with you all : )

Dare I write of pain,
fire within that burns?
I'll not feed my brain
tinder that it yearns.
With no fuel to gain,
misery adjourns,
flames go on the wane,
sanity returns.

Author's Note

A gift poem from Aethereal its great i want to share it with you all : ) all writing credit goes to him /her.

Reviews

[Jebat Serawak]

I love how you rhyme your poem! Love this poem!

[Horizons]

Thank you for sharing this poem with cafe's writers too. I felt the depth of the poem you dropped .. Very nice ink. It's a short poem but for me .. it's a very strong and a powerful write that ripped every writer's heart who reads the poem .... I liked the theme, because in today's life everybody's in pain .. and pain's became a common thing in the life and pain coming only through of people's stuffs .. what they do every-time in a very bad way .. but every body should leave without pain but with peace and happiness that's what every body wants to live.

Anyway, wonderful poem...
Keep writing and sharing nice pieces. It's a very realistic poem. Well written.