Where once there wasn't

I cant write about pain anymore .

Why fuel the fire as it burns ?

Il let it burn till there is nothing to burn.

Till the ashes are smoking no more .

I'll trample the very ground it destroyed barefoot .

Let the rain displace the grey earth .

Watch the green grass spout from the ashes .

Let hope grow where once it wasnt .

Author's Note

i would realy appreciate it if you could review my poem , i love writing and i want to get better at it your opinons can help me do that .... Hope you enjoy this poem .

Reviews

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

Let strength pierce through the weakness,let i smile through my tears,stand as though my body is not brutaly abused by the so called love you dish out to me,let i take the excrusiating bruises your abusive touch has offered me, you pain me but i love u unconditionaly............great stuff makes me visit a place and inspires me to write,dats what poetry is supposed to do so well done!

[Izzy-01]

thank you so much : ) ......i cant think of anything better than being able to inspire someone by doing what i love the most ..... Thanks for the encouraging review

[wordwarrior]

Wonderfully thoughtful and penned with great inner strength. Love the hope that burns and that you won't let pain rule life.
Bravo and thank you for sharing!

[Sarah Jean]

This is beautiful, keep writing! :)

[Izzy-01]

Thanks for the encouragement i definately will: )

[Aethereal]

This is a magnificent poem, Izzy-01! Your poem inspired me to write a tiny gift poem about pain which you may keep as your own:

Pain

Dare I write of pain,
fire within that burns?
I'll not feed my brain
tinder that it yearns.

With no fuel to gain,
misery adjourns,
flames go on the wane,
sanity returns.

[Izzy-01]

thank you so much for the review it was very encouraging ..will treasure the gift poem always it was awsome : )

[popourii]

Great work! I think you got a typo in one spot though. Thank you for sharing with us :D

[Izzy-01]

thanks for taking the time to review my work i think i see the mistake ....... much appreciated : ) i was never any good at spelling ......

[popourii]

That's okay! You will alway get better!

[Akashi]

It explains most of everything, Izzy!

[Izzy-01]

thank u

[Akashi]

You're welcome.

[Saumya]

wonderfulllllllllll ,fantastic as always...........keeeeeeeeeeeeep writing and rocking.........with lots of love.............
saumya

[Izzy-01]

thanks

[Just Kim]

This is really good, flows nicely too

[Izzy-01]

thanks : )