On this cold winter night

Her footsteps are quick,

Her breathing is light

Running away

Into the cold heartless night

A hunstman follows 

With a lean mean blade

Carrying out the deed of 

her step mothers hate

She was once loved,

Held dearly in warm arms

'In her fathers protection

And healing warm smiles

Dead he is now, with her mother too

But never a tear was shed, for both the two

The Queen smiles evilly

With Hell in her eyes

The country soon learning

Who they despise

'Snow White, dear child,

Run far, far away

So that your may perhaps

Live another day

Your feet will carry you 

To wildflower field,

Where you will hide from troubles

And all your worst fears

But you must come back

When the time is right

To take back the Crown

During a cold heartless night

It must be done

You know it is true, 

But keep your innocence

It's your svaing virtue

Don't learn to hate,

But love every moment

Even the Woman,

Who destroyed your home

With lips red as blood,

Hair black as night,

Save yourself princess,

On this cold heartless night...

My dear dear Snow White.'

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

I just loved this poem!! It flowed nicely and it was written well! Definitely a great great write!

[Izzie Rohrer]

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

[ApplesAreAmazing]

Personally, I really love the tale of Snow White. I think you summed up what happened really well. What made you decide to write a poem about Snow White?

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is a really good take on Snow White, I can see the huntsman actually saying this to her. I see some spelling errors but other than that I think you did a good job putting it together.

Good Job

[Izzie Rohrer]

Thank you for your comment. I am happy that it was actually worth someones time. Sorry im so late in reply. :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome...and that's okay