Red

Eradication of the innocent

Devouring of the weak

The she devil limps and crawls

Returning to her sleep

Insomniac b*****d

Creeping around desolate

All pain no gain

Blackouts they instigate

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She rips him open kills the heart

Then revives it with a pill

Only to make it hers

Then stab it again

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Don’t dance with the innocent just let them be

The moment has past now you are the enemy!

My time will come and you shall ache

No time to breathe your bones ill break.

-scene

Reviews

[Biatch]

Izcoolscene!

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. you own your time ... just as you own your words ... and i have no doubt in my mind ... that both are destined to shine ... even more than now ... this is beautifully written ... i identify with it completely ... more than you can imagine ...

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

haha, i remember this one. And reading it again, this was pretty chilling, nice flow. Great job.