She Found Home

this is about a woman who just bought a house.

With a swish of her hair,

it shows her kindling care,

when she closes her eyes slowly,

it shows she's safe in care,

with every our pass by in this house,

she's  more and more fond of what she sees,

she begins feeling comfortable more and more in this house,

she starts feeling sort of like a mouse,

twiddling around and around her house,

she knows it foot by foot,

all around her friends come over,

they cheer and cheer til the night is over,

and when they all leave,

she is still comfortable in the house,

she knows she found home,

and that's what she's all about.

Author's Note

Please give me a review and tell me what you thought of it (:
Thank you for reading and have a great day

Reviews

[V. P. Trujillo]

Pretty quaint and I like that, the imagery was nice. A wee mouse in a comfortable place.

[Ivy Smiley]

Thank you for your review (: and i'm glad you liked it.

[Justin]

that was really good, i can tell the woman was a hard worker and deserved something like that, i really enjoyed it :)

[Ivy Smiley]

thanks you (:

[Ivy Smiley]

and yes she has (:

[Justin]

your welcome, we can learn from her, knowing that hard work pays off

[Ivy Smiley]

yes, it does pay off, or at least it normally does .

[Justin]

yup, then we will be able to have stuff like a home and so on

[Ivy Smiley]

yes in deed (:

[Justin]

then u will be able to write a story about your success

[Ivy Smiley]

hopefully so (:

[Justin]

you will, then that will be the best story ever

[Ivy Smiley]

Thank you (: I hope so

[Justin]

your welcome ivy, it will be :)

[Ivy Smiley]

(: you're kind

[Justin]

that is me being me, that is who i am

[Ivy Smiley]

i figured that so far lol

[Justin]

yea lol :P

[Ivy Smiley]

(: tis stated

[Justin]

yea, everything is going to be great :)

[Ivy Smiley]

(: I bet it will

[Justin]

yup, it will, i promise

[Ivy Smiley]

(: thank you for all your support

[Justin]

your welcome ivy, i will help u will anything

[Ivy Smiley]

Same here Justin (:

[Justin]

thanks ivy :)

[Ivy Smiley]

No problemo (:

[Justin]

:P that is y we are awesome