My Killer Heart

This poem is vital so please if you can't stand the deepness then don't read it.

My heart is a killer on the run,

it doesn't stop even when the morning comes,

it takes and takes until there isn't any  left,

the bites crazy,

it's harder than meth,

my killer smell can smell the bleeding,

of hearts across the street just oozing,

oozing of pain and misery, 

and that when they're able to see me,

they look and see the dark beauty being shocking,

they take in the shocking and I collect the bad,

collect all the bad that they always had,

in the deep parts of the bloody heart you see the feeling,

the feeling of love that is always pending,

I say I love them in real life,

but how can a monster love when it has no eyes,

I'm blinded by the light if you have not noticed,

I can't love because I'm focused,

focused on pain and misery,

the only thing that can complete me,

as they sleep in my arm,

I see they're pain in all their scars,

I see the bleeding that will always curse them,

I see the curves that will always diverse them,

then when the night comes to end,

I say a goodbye to ones of those people,

the people that deserve a heart but have bleed,

so I feed and they tremble of the thing they call love,

the thing I know is nothing I can say I know of,

my heart, 

the monster,

has conquered all of the above,

except the monster that brought me to this,

the one I used to say I loved,

As the days seem to grow,

the heartless person will soon take control,

conquering one city at a time,

until it's time to show,

the truth that lies under,

inside of this dark snow

Author's Note

Please give me an idea of what you think of it.

Reviews

[Misha864]

Yummie yummie :) I like it:)
I hope you don't feel the same in real life otherwise I got scared of you :)

[Ivy Smiley]

Ahaaaa thank you but i don't really show a lot of emotion in real life unless someone makes me mad (:

[Justin]

that was really awesome, sometimes when we listen to our heart, it takes us down the wrong path and stuff we regret later :) i enjoyed it :)

[Ivy Smiley]

Thank you (:

[Justin]

your welcome, i enjoyed it, keep it up :)

[Ivy Smiley]

You too (:

[Justin]

thanks :) i will :)

[Ivy Smiley]

good then (:

[Justin]

yup, as long as you continue to read my material

[Ivy Smiley]

I will I gurantee(:

[Justin]

yea then it is all worth it

[Ivy Smiley]

(: okay I believe you

[Justin]

yup :) writings is in our blood

[Ivy Smiley]

and head lol (:

[Justin]

yup that too

[Ivy Smiley]

ahaaaa in deed

[Justin]

lol :) we cant be stopped lol

[Ivy Smiley]

lol this is true i tell you that much (:

[Missiannelli]

OH-EM-GEE... This is one of my favorites! Collector of hearts :) You are very talented. Please keep up the good work!

[Ivy Smiley]

Thank you (: Have a great day and I wish you the best of writing!