Loveless winter

Feels like a winter season
So depressing
So lonely
Deprived of your attention, consideration
Not acknowledging my importance

Desperate
Feels like I'm begging
Pleading, imploring
Craving
Only for you to love me
Do I even count for you?
Question
Like always there is no answer

I find myself in this chill of depression
Where each snowflake is like a teardrop
Softly landing on my pained heart

The stark, barren trees stand as silent sentinels
Echoing the emptiness of my loneliness
Their branches reaching out like desperate hands grasping for connection

Just as the sun struggles to break through the thick, grey clouds
Hope often fights to emerge amidst the heaviness my sorrow
Casting fleeting rays of warmth that briefly melt the ice that coats my soul

In this season, the world outside grows quiet
Mirroring the silence within me
As I navigate the long, cold nights in search of light, solace and your love
But the only thing I find is your loveless

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Beautiful sadness, and, more than but, superb writing.

' The stark, barren trees stand as silent sentinels
Echoing the emptiness of my loneliness
Their branches reaching out like desperate hands grasping for connection'

Such visual three lines.. setting your tears free to release the meaning of your words, Olivia.

You write inscribed memories and future fears.. but - know how to leave them with true feeling, no theatricals, but truth.

[Olivia Bant]

Thank you for your review and your words, Emma. It means a lot to me.

[emmajoygreen]

Your writing is quite something, am only too happy to review you, Olivia. Enjoy the weekend. :)

[Olivia Bant]

Tkank you. You, too