The Cruel Fate...

The Cruel Fate...

A Poem by Maximus
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This poetry describes the effect and impact of love that is lost in the dusty sands of time.

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In the depths of ancient desert seen,
Love faded as the sands did crawl,
No longer bloomed the rose so keen,
A mournful loss, a painful fall.

Once vibrant flame now lost in time,
The heartache etched upon my face,
A love that felt so pure, divine,
Gone without a single trace.

Like the mirage upon the dunes,
Our love was but a fleeting dream,
Now swallowed by the shifting tunes,
Of wind that howls, forever unseen.

Oh, cruel fate, how could you steal,
The beauty that we held so dear?
Our hearts entwined beneath love's seal,
Now shattered by the souvenirs.

The memories, like whispers fade,
Lost in the vast and barren sand,
A hollow ache forever made,
In the empty spaces where we stand.

The windswept dunes, they hold no grace,
For love that once had bloomed so bright,
They only whisper, leave no trace,
Of love vanished in the dead of night.

Yet still, I mourn, an endless grief,
Amidst the echoes of the past,
For with each fading, golden leaf,
My heartache lingers, shadows cast.

Oh, dusty sands of time, so grand,
You swallow all that once did thrive,
Yet still, my love, forever stand,
In every breath I take, alive.

I'll whisper your name into the wind,
And hope that someday we will meet,
In realms beyond where time does end,
A love renewed, forever sweet.

Until then, I'll walk this barren land,
With bated breath and tear-stained eyes,
For in my heart, you'll firmly stand,
Love's pained demise, my sad demise.
Written By,
Ivan Edwin Pen Name--Maximus.

© 2023 Maximus


Author's Note

Maximus
It's a broken heart poem written by me which describes that how it feels when your love gets lost in the dusty sands of time.

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Creatively tragic, lovely rhyme scheme.

Great read,

With love,

Matthew

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maximus

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot my friend, your precious review is valuable for me.

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Added on November 16, 2023
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Tags: Lost Love, Broken Heart, Pain, Love, Sadness, Dusty, Sands Of Time, Cruel Fate.

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Maximus
Maximus

Allahabad, Uttar Pradesh, India



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