The wonders

The wonders

A Poem by PeaceOfMind

O tell me how the waves crashed by the shore
And how magnificently the sun kissed the meadows

Show me how the diamonds were made from coal
Or the clear glass from the brown sand

Whisper to me all the wonders of the world
And I will see them through your closed eyes

For I will grasp every little memory of ours time
Till the end of time when we peacefully die

© 2016 PeaceOfMind


Author's Note

PeaceOfMind
I have been having a writer's block (although I wouldn't call myself a write, but moving on) I tried to write over it and I am not really sure of this all.

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Wow... This is different! "In a nice way!", the style is magnificent, every line is a world of its own. Well done, really well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow ,if this is an example of writers block, I wish I'd have it! You need not be unsure. This is beautiful. Your words whisper the wonders of the world.
You should indeed call yourself a writer...

bill. : )

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jeddah, Eastern, Saudi Arabia



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