Emotion

Emotion

A Poem by Andrew

Cuts and scars heal but the tears I lose will never comeback I show emotion to feel not to hurt. I try and try to hold it in, but it all falls out forgive me for whom I am and then you will understand.

© 2014 Andrew


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Everyone can relate to this ... Simple but deep !


Posted 10 Years Ago


This is something I feel that many people can relate to. I like that you were able to say that you are that way in a simple short way that anyone can understand.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Stunning how a few words can be so powerful, huh? I've been through this and it's nothing easy or anything to joke about. People do certain things because they want to "feel", so then they don't have to open up to those around them. It's important to be honest with ourselves and our feelings because if we hold it all in, we will self-destruct. Many people nowadays are a ticking time bomb and I believe that everyone has their own breaking point. Wonderful write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I Am Svetlana

10 Years Ago

And that's probably the best thing about writing. That we are able to get so much emotion out and sa.. read more
Andrew

10 Years Ago

Thank you and as to you so am I. If you ever need someone I am here.
I Am Svetlana

10 Years Ago

Awe, how sweet! Thank you so much :) are you free to message for a bit now? I really haven't been ab.. read more
I like this a lot, its short and straight to the point. yet still emotional! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Andrew

10 Years Ago

Awh thank you. This would have to be one of my most difficult writings just because I didn't know ho.. read more
I like it. You tell the story that emotion brings in a brief setting, but one that can be easily understood.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andrew

10 Years Ago

Thank you for understanding what I was doing with this piece. A lot of people that I have read it to.. read more
Katelyn

10 Years Ago

Sure :) I'll do that.
Andrew

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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