Life is great and filled with amazing possibilities. Always look at it from a positive perspective. Don't ever think life is horrible just work through the hard times and make great times, because in the end we all deserve greatness in our life.
Again, although your poems are short, they pack the idea that you're writing about into every word. I agree with you when you advise to never look at life in a negative perspective and that if you do, to work through the bad times because if you don't, then there will never be any great times in your eyes. That you'll be missing out on something wonderful that if happening right in front of you. So, with that said, I like it a lot because it is the truth.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much you always know what I am going for I appreciate it :).
10 Years Ago
No problem :) I guess our minds just think alike.
10 Years Ago
Haha I guess we do now I need to learn how to right stories like you. :)
10 Years Ago
:) I'll have to learn how to write poetry then haha
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:) well you are a great writer so it will be easy for you I don't think I can teach it I am not good.. read more:) well you are a great writer so it will be easy for you I don't think I can teach it I am not good enough yet I can try though
Trust me, you are far greater at writing poetry than I will ever be.
10 Years Ago
And trust me, you are far better at writing story's, but maybe if we work together then we can get b.. read moreAnd trust me, you are far better at writing story's, but maybe if we work together then we can get better.
Again, although your poems are short, they pack the idea that you're writing about into every word. I agree with you when you advise to never look at life in a negative perspective and that if you do, to work through the bad times because if you don't, then there will never be any great times in your eyes. That you'll be missing out on something wonderful that if happening right in front of you. So, with that said, I like it a lot because it is the truth.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much you always know what I am going for I appreciate it :).
10 Years Ago
No problem :) I guess our minds just think alike.
10 Years Ago
Haha I guess we do now I need to learn how to right stories like you. :)
10 Years Ago
:) I'll have to learn how to write poetry then haha
10 Years Ago
:) well you are a great writer so it will be easy for you I don't think I can teach it I am not good.. read more:) well you are a great writer so it will be easy for you I don't think I can teach it I am not good enough yet I can try though
Trust me, you are far greater at writing poetry than I will ever be.
10 Years Ago
And trust me, you are far better at writing story's, but maybe if we work together then we can get b.. read moreAnd trust me, you are far better at writing story's, but maybe if we work together then we can get better.
My name is Andrew and I am new to sharing my writing. I am not sure if I am good nor bad so I joined. I have always liked writing and I thought this would be cool and that it would also help me get be.. more..