Life from someone else's eyes

Look at your life from someone else's eyes and just try to realize not every ones vision of life is the same and that's why when were in pain it never seems the same.

Reviews

[Pax]

I think it is somehow a poem, but more of a quote, a ramdom thought that just comes out of your mind. And for that matter i think you did a fine job on describing that feeling, the feeling that you'll need to widen your understanding about life in the eyes of others... that shows how to used your empathy... I find this piece very expressive...

[Andrew]

i thank you for the review it means a lot to me. Most of my writings are old writings that I wrote when i was younger so i am not completely sure what to call them. However It's awesome that you had understand what my message was for this.

[kylie giamba]

Great message, but you could really expand on this idea. The possibilities are endless but needless to say you did a good job!

[Andrew]

Thank you and I will be sure to do that :)

[Alyson Nicholee]

Powerful message, but again the writing isnt much of a poem, more like an idea. You could definitely expand this! :)

[Andrew]

Thank you for your input and I will defiantly try to expand it. Can you also check out one of my new poems I just made it's called "Boredom becomes alive" :)

[Persona]

The title drew me in and the rhymes are nice, but the writing itself is amateur. When you write a poem, put rhyming at the bottom of the list and focus more on creating pretty image instead of generally telling the reader what to do.

[Andrew]

Thank you for this review. This will defiantly help me when i continue you to write and I will remember this, but for the next few weeks most of work will be old so i know there will be problems, but I always am looking for more advice.