Her scars

Her cuts and bruises

Show wins and loses

They show the way

She lives day to day

They act like flashbacks

To show how he acts

They' re her scars

That remind her of his late nights at the bars

She sees the misery

When she sees those deformaties

Like demons that invade

Her skin when he doesn't behave

She cowers in her room in fear of her father

As she listens to him screaming and yelling at her mother

She lives in silence not speaking her mind

She uses her writing to leave the scars behind

Reviews

[Ryan Heisel]

Your writing is very easy to relate to. Aside from a few flow issues you have the potential to be a great writer!

[MissDragon]

you show alot of emotion in your writing although you may not see that. i understand what you mean in your writing and feel what you say.